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Some people believe that unpaid community service, such as helping at a charity or cleaning a local park, should be a compulsory part of secondary school education. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Band 7 · 298 words

Nowadays, many people think that community service should be compulsory for secondary school students. I agree with this idea because it benefits both students and society1, although the amount of time involved should be limited.

Firstly, community service helps students to understand the problems in their local area. For example, if teenagers volunteer at a food bank, they realise that many families cannot afford basic necessities2. This first-hand experience can make them more responsible and more caring person5, and it may encourage them to get involved in their community later in life. In addition, students develop practical skills like teamwork and communication3, which will be valuable in their future careers. Since the service is compulsory, every student would gain these benefits, not only those who are already interested in volunteering.

On the other hand, some people believe that forcing students to do this work is counterproductive4. They argue that teenagers will not enjoy activities that they are obliged to do, so they may stop helping others as soon as they leave school. This is a fair point, but I think schools can solve it by offering a variety of choices, such as tutoring younger children or cleaning local parks. In this way, students can choose an activity which they are interested in it6, and as a result they will be more motivated.

However, schools should be careful7 because students already have a lot of homeworks8 and exams. Therefore, the service should not take up too much time, for example two or three hours in a month.

In conclusion, I strongly believe that community service should be a compulsory part of secondary education, as long as students can choose the activity and the time is limited. This would help young people to become active and responsible members of society.

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    IELTS, Academic test format: WritingChecked 12 October 2026.
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